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    1. Yes, know what you mean, thanks for noticing. 🙂
      It is what I was going for… it came to me in a burst while still in bed, and I knew soon as I got up that I had to complete it quickly, less than 15 minutes. It just came down to finding right words and also eliminating extra lines, cause I originally had six or so. But then the ‘stifled sigh’ came to me and I loved the resulting compactness. (apologies for the soliloquy)

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